Rhythmic Tuesday

 I’m pleased to see that some of you are beginning to share you poetry on my website! I have really enjoyed reading the poems and look forward to seeing what you will share in the future!

 If you are interested in sharing your poetry here, click the Pearls of Poetry tab above and share away!

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*SCBWI

Are you a member of SCBWI?

SCBWI is an organization that is essential for you to belong to as a children’s writer. It stands for the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators.  Here is the link to the website: http://www.scbwi.org/

You will find everything you need to know about writing and illustrating for children here. There are local and national conferences, awards, grants, a resource, library, a place to sell your books, and much much more. Please check it out if you are not a member. There is an annual fee of $90.00 and it will be the best investment in your future that you will ever make.  I’m told many editors view your membership in SCBWI as the sign of a professional writer so make sure to add that into a cover letter when you submit a manuscript.

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When I began this journey to create RhyPiBoMo back in November of 2013, I started asking other writers who they suggested I ask to guest blog…Shutta Crum’s name kept coming back to me as quickly as I would ask the question!  She has been a delight to meet and I am thrilled that she is here to share her insight into scansion, meter and rhythm!

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So, without further ado, I’m honored to present today’s

Golden Quill Guest Blogger

Shutta Crum

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        Rhypibomo Guest Blogger Badge        Shutta Crum 1

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Tuning Your Ear to the Sound of Poetry

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Studies confirm that we hear sounds before we are born—our mother’s heartbeats, intestinal sounds, music, and the rise and fall of spoken language. Further, researchers have found that fetuses who are spoken to in a variety of pitches have an increased interest in sounds, and the inflections in sound, after birth. This is reflected in their heartbeats and brain activity.

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To really savor a poem, I believe we need to hear it read aloud. Oh yes, the letters on the page and the physical body of a poem is important, too. It’s good to be able to see that, and even to trace our fingers over the printed page—touching the text and the spaces around it. But to really take a poem into ourselves the music of its language must be taken in through the ears. (If only we could eat them, and smell them, too!)

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One way writers catch clunkiness in poems, or prose, is to hear their work read aloud, either by the writer, or others. The ear is more precise in rooting out awkward phrases, discordant sounds, and clumsy rhythms than the eye. Some authors record themselves reading their work and then play that back, noting places where the work could be smoother.

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Some writers, like myself, also must strive to overcome regional dialects. My family is from the Appalachian region of Kentucky and West Virginia. Sometimes I hear words differently than others do. I’m aware of this, and will often have another read my work aloud for me. (Spouses are good for this!) And occasionally, I will listen to the pronunciations of some words using an online audio dictionary. This is just to make sure I’ve put the stresses in the right places—especially if I am working on a metrical piece.

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One of the most inspiring and helpful activities a poet can partake in is to attend poetry readings. Listen to others, their cadences, pitch, word choices, and yes . . . accents. Let yourself drift away on the melodies of the spoken word. Sure, you may not like the voices of some readers. And you may not agree with the message, or perspective, of some poems. But don’t worry about that too much. You’re there to listen to the rise and fall of our quirky language—the quick prick of impish “i” sounds, and lull of “u,” and those good, deep double “oo” sounds, too. And there’re all those soothing, or explosive, consonants, as well.

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These are the tools of our trade. We need to hear them in use—not just read them—before we can master our tools. And if you’re brave enough, go to a reading on an open mic night and let others hear you read. You may also come away with some valuable feedback. Finally, if you hear a poem and it just “feels right,” try to get a copy. Read it aloud, over and over. Try to figure out why it works for you. As a writer it isn’t enough to just know it works; you want to know why/how it works and how you can do that, too. Sometimes we simply love something because it is familiar—and that’s fine. A poem you love may use a measure that has become a cultural standard such as the ballad measure, or common measure. (Alternating four beat and three beat iambic lines rhyming aBaB, or aBcB, such as in America the Beautiful, Emily Dickinson’s poems, or hymns like Amazing Grace.)

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If a poem you love is in a standard metrical pattern such as those listed above, ask yourself: How can I work with this, change it, and still love it? And let me say that I believe all poems are lyrical—though some are a bit less so than others. This is due to a poem’s condensed nature. Generally, a poem has a great deal to accomplish in a small amount of time and space. (Note, there are always exceptions. Epic poetry can fill volumes!) There are insights, sensual details, probing questions, humor, pathos and epiphanies magically conjured. Lyricism facilitates all that, and more. With the right sounds we are lulled into a place where our defenses are down and we, as listeners and lovers of poetry, say “Here! I’ve opened my heart. Now, come in!”

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Isn’t that the point of it all?

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Bio: Shutta Crum is the author of numerous picture books and two novels. Most of her books have made “best book” and state reading lists around the country. THUNDER-BOOMER! was named an SLJ, ALA and Smithsonian Mag. “Notable Book” of the year. Of Shutta’s book MINE! the NY Times says: “. . . a delightful example of the drama and emotion that a nearly wordless book can convey.” DOZENS OF COUSINS, illustrated by the award-wining David Catrow, is her latest book. In 2005, Shutta was asked to read at the White House. In 2010 she was invited to tour American military base schools across Japan. For more: http://www.shutta.com .

* DOZENS OF COUSINS (Illustrated by the award-winning David Catrow). It’s written in free verse and started off as a poem I’d written for my parents as a kind of apology–years ago.

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Here are a few of Shutta’s books that you will want to read!

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Shutta Crum 4

 Dozens of Cousins. Clarion, 2013.

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 Shutta Crum 2

 Thunder Boomer! Clarion Books 2009

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Shutta Crum 3

Mine! Alfred A. Knopf, 2011.

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Thank you Shutta Crum!

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RhyPiBoMo Daily Lesson: Tuesday, April 8th

By Angie Karcher © 2014 Lesson 10

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Scansion, Meter vs. Rhythm

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Scansion is: when a writer uses a system of marking accented and unaccented syllables to analyze the meter in the poem.

Accented syllables are pronounced slightly louder and with more emphasis than unaccented syllables.

Poetry is arranged in lines and in patterns of accented and unaccented syllables called metrical feet.

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Once you can recognize and mark the accented/unaccented syllables in a line, you will become better at expressing the rhythmic flow you desire.

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Here is a great article on how to practice scansion:

http://www.ehow.com/how_10066149_mark-accented-syllables-poetry.html

Typically unstressed lines are marked with an upward curved symbol that looks like a smile.  It looks like this  ˘

There are many, many symbols that can describe the stress and unstressed parts of words depending on the teachings of various linguists.

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When researching scansion, meter and rhythm, I found this page online that perfectly and simply describes everything we need to know about rhythm, meter and scansion…as I am having a terrible time getting the website to accept all the symbols involved with scansion and the spacing is a complete nightmare, I am sharing this information from a teacher’s webpage he posted for his class. I take no credit in this information at all. It is fully Mr. Black’s words and research. I am simply sharing it for the sake of education and because it is so well said in it’s simplicity and content!  Plus, there is no need to reinvent the wheel here! I will not be this fortunate to find such a great lesson over our other topics…LOL

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Please refer to this link for today’s lesson:

The link: http://server.riverdale.k12.or.us/~bblack/meter.html

 

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Just so you know, Mr. Black is a 5th grade English teacher Are you smarter than a 5th grader?

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Writing Exercise: Try to scan these poem excerpts below?

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The morns are meeker than they were,

The nuts are getting brown;

The berry’s cheek is plumper,

The rose is out of town. –Emily Dickinson

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Bats have webby wings that fold up;

Bats from ceilings hang down rolled up;

Bats when flying undismayed are;

Bats are careful; bats use radar; –Frank Jacobs, “The Bat”

 

Resources:

http://www.ehow.com/how_10066149_mark-accented-syllables-poetry.html

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Mr. Black, You are my Hero!

I’ve tried to come up with something to add to his information but without sounding redundant, that’s it in a nut shell! I feel odd not having typed all that out tonight, searching for better examples and then sharing them but it would have taken hours and then once transferred to my blog would have taken more hours to get the spacing right…so I am letting this one be. When it’s good, it’s good! This gives me more time to work on the next lesson. Ok…Guilt trip over! LOL

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92 thoughts on “Rhythmic Tuesday

  1. Shunta I love your books! Thank for sharing your tips with us today and thank you Angie for another amazing day of rhyming!

  2. I took one poetry course in college – enough to persuade me I’d never understand it. It was very satisfying to get a pay check for a poem I wrote a few years later. That’s not to say I “understand” it all, but I at least know what I like! Thanks! This is already so much better than that college course!

  3. I’m holding Shutta’s ‘Dozens of Cousins’ in my hand…loving the uninhibited joy that rushes at me as I read her wonderful lines.🙂
    Thank you for the post, Shutta…and Angie…you are amazing! I know this is MORE than I would get at a rhyming picture book workshop…way more!

  4. I must read Shutta’s books – I’ll be off to the library soon. Thanks for your words. And thanks to Mr. Black and Angie. So much wonderful information. Loving it!

  5. Shutta’s books sound like loads of fun to read. I loved what she offered us. Even her blog post is lyrical and poetic. Romantic even. Angie, you’ve done it again. Amazing work. Mr. Black would be proud to know how his words are offering great service to so many aspiring writers of pb rhyme. You’ve got so much information. It should go in a book. What a teacher you are!

  6. Thanks to Shutta for the wonderful advice about listening to poetry. While I read a lot out loud, I don’t hear others reading much poetry! And thanks also to Angie and Mr. Black for an excellent lesson!

  7. Great post! I hope we are going to talk more about how to successfully vary the rhythm. This is something I really want to learn more about.

  8. My goodness, I have so much to learn. Thank you, THANK YOU for this crash course on poetry! I am making myself a book of things to study in the coming months!

  9. Mr. Black, whoever you are, you rock! I thought this was so informative and helpful. I certainly feel as if my own eye for feet, as well as my understanding of feet and their types, and my understanding of meter, has definitely been strengthened because of this lesson. Awesomeness! Thanks!

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